Look at what I made and om nom nom it! (Post your creations pt. 2)

[TapThatBooty]

Awwwwww.
I can haz cat nao yeas?

[pinkyfriend]

Love those plants fway...gotta have them.
Not a problem since I check MTS2 at LEAST once a day...
yeah I am a downloading addict!!!
and a clutter addict lol...

[TapThatBooty]

Them plants really are fab aren't they Pinky?
I'm constantly checking over at MTS2 for them, I REALLY!! want them.
I ended up downloading clutter by crocubana(sp) earlier.

[crunk]

Not to be mean or anything.
But I am constantly reading some recent posts
in poem-speak
like some sort of behemian nightmare.
make
it
stop
now
kthxbai

[Deckhand Dollface]

thankyou - i'll work on it a bit more

I didn't mean my comment in a bad way, I just thought I'd give you my opinion.
And I feel I should add that the reason why I wouldn't use it, isn't because I don't like it, I really do, but it's to do with personal taste for the game.

Er, she didn't sound upset. Even though most of the posts here aren't that critical of the work presented, this thread is for people to get honest feedback on their work in order to improve. You don't need to feel like you have to apologize for how you feel about the work presented or about any suggestions you make on how to improve it. Besides, both of your responses were sweeter than sugar, why would you feel guilty?

Trust me - not upset   its nice to get feedback which is useful

[TapThatBooty]

Crunk:
How do you mean? By breaking up the sentence structure for easier reading? Or by making words rhyme? lol

Dollface:
I'm glad you didn't take offence to it. For someone who is so brutaly honest with people, to the point of being a mega man bitch, when it comes to comments about peoples work, I don't want to be mean to them, so I choose my words carfully.

[Missbonbon]

Aww AL we need to get married now so I can partake in your stash of adorable kittehs!

[crunk]

Crunk:
How do you mean? By breaking up the sentence structure for easier reading? Or by making words rhyme? lol

Paragraphs, we can haz them plz? Warning: I am feeling bitchy and silly, which is a bad combination.

[deelink]

Crunk, I hear you. I am all for colloquial speech, but when people start to seperate their sentences in either "lyric" form, or "haiku" form. It just doesn't make me want to read it. I learnt that from trying to reread my posts pre-2006. I was realising, that I didn't want to read my disjointed paragraphs and trailed off words. So I rolled up my sleeves and began to make an effort to write in a proper sentence structure. And since we are fighting this Paysite War, we want everyone's post to be read and kept for posperity! Arr!

[TapThatBooty]

Deelink, Crunk, I've taken note of what you have both said and I shall try my best to not seperate my posts without it being nesciary(sp lol).
I always break up what I'm saying in relation to the person who I'm replying too, so that if they say something, then something else, I break it up so they know what part I'm saying what too. If that makes sense? 

[deelink]

Yeah it does. Alia does it too, it's not that bad, but you have to make sure your sentences properly end (like hers, for easy reading), and if you are going to be addressing people, you can break it up, by quoting them (Like Cala does) or by using their username before addressing them. I am not "lecturing" you on how to write, just keep in mind that you are being read by a lot of people, and if you don't structure your posts (and I am not talking to only you, this is like a freakin' trend here in PMBD) the regulars and most pillaging pirates who are pressed for time, are just not going to read it. And that's bullocks, when you could've just made an effort to get your point across by adhering to a few grammatical rules.

If you write like
I mean SHE IS SO but the thing is, it's like, what does she think.
I am so annoyed. Went over there and the link was
so bad the conversation.

I mean, I can understand what I am trying to say. But can you?

[TapThatBooty]

Ok Deelink, I see your point. I dont think you were getting on at me. At the end of the day, if you hadn't have said anything, then I wouldn't have relised I was doing anything wrong. The fact that I am using my shit key is down to keirra telling me I had lost mine, and sent me a new one. So I guess what I am trying to say is, that if no one says anything, then nothing can get done about it.

[SoggyFox]

Okay, here is a couple pictures of the changed bits - namely the wood tones of the windows and doors, and the stairs.







Last thoughts before I clean it up for uploading?

[TapThatBooty]

It's amazing how simply changing the color of a few things can completely change the look of something. You have drasticaly changed that, and it's for the better. I would totaly play that lot if i had AL installed. Well done.
I am totaly spamming this thread, I'm sorry.

[SoggyFox]

I need to find some similar windows to use to make a more basic game version, though I'd still need at least one expansion for the inside stair area.