Cookie, I'm really glad there is a download link for those - your daughter did an excellent job, especially for her first try! Tell her I'm looking forward to her second recoloring attempt!
Nouk, I would make the shorter side a little longer or have a bang that slants down - as it it it looks a little oddly proportioned. I agree on the streaks - toned down would be good, maybe add some golden tones to the darker areas to brighten the whole thing up?