I really like the shine on the eye. I tend to prefer more natural eyecolors, for my own use, but I think the eye is shaping up quite nicely anyway. The area around the sclera looks kind of wonky to me, but I don't know if it's the eye or the liner since I'm no CC artist.
Personally, I like slightly heavier, darker eyeliner when I'm going for the smokey look, but that's just the emo in me and not everyone would agree, since this is pretty and natural.
The shadow looks quite nice, particularly on the upper eye: the eyelid crease is quite well done. Nice work!