I really like the shine on the eye. I tend to prefer more natural eyecolors, for my own use, but I think the eye is shaping up quite nicely anyway. The area around the sclera looks kind of wonky to me, but I don't know if it's the eye or the liner since I'm no CC artist.
Personally, I like slightly heavier, darker eyeliner when I'm going for the smokey look, but that's just the emo in me and not everyone would agree, since this is pretty and natural.
![Wink](http://phorum.mustnotbenamed.com/Smileys/default/wink.gif)
The shadow looks quite nice, particularly on the upper eye: the eyelid crease is quite well done. Nice work!